Thursday, July 1, 2010

雨下一整夜

雨下一整夜
今夜
它不想与风告别。

但风却从它身上
淡淡 掠过 ....

它转过头
随后飘来的是
陌生的风。

来不及思考
它与同伴对望着微笑
落下地面
结束这短暂
与风的邂逅 ....

雨下了一整夜。
风 呼呼地说
别爱上我。

12 comments:

Cherry said...

周杰伦。。。

- JieYun - said...

erm ? y suddenly mention jay at here?

- JieYun - said...

ooo ...i knew d ...
his new song izzit ??
雨下一整晚 , his new song ...
zzz ... erm ...
similar to his new song ... sien diao ...sigh ..

Cherry said...

ya la..haha....Jay's new song lo...
u la...wan write same name v his song..haha...
y so sien?? u dun like Jay??

p3eng peNg wond3rl@nd said...

显掉,因为跟周董的创作竟然是一样的吧。。。
看下个创作应该会是超人会飞了。。。lol

- JieYun - said...

cherry & peng peng :
ya lo , sien diao becos this post will let ppl think that i was copied idea from jay mah ...
T.T ...sigh .... a failed writing ...

- JieYun - said...

err ... but only the title similar to jay's new song mah , content totally different ...
jay's song lyric pro and better a lot lo ......

Cherry said...

content sure different la..jz tat title make us think abt jay, cause same title mah..haha
ganbatte ne...

p3eng peNg wond3rl@nd said...

去拜周杰伦为师。。。789

- JieYun - said...

[Cherry] err .... title different 1 word with jay's new song ley .. lol ^^
-- > jay song = 雨下一整晚 . haha ... erm ... but 95% looks alike d ... T.T , sigh ....

- JieYun - said...

[peng peng] erm ... who m i oo ? I m just a normal ppl without any talented , jay is not willing to be my master la ... haha ....

Cherry said...

haha...paiseh le....