Tuesday, August 17, 2010

被拆散的恋人

我们是被
大自然 注定
拆散的恋人。

从出生的那一天起
我就开始
朝着你生活下去

我每一天都看着你
直到你离开这里
有时候
我甚至一整天
都看不见你
天空就会为我下起雨
像泪水弄湿了我的身体。

我出生就爱上你
但显然你不知道我是谁
我虽然看得见你
但我们有很遥远的距离

我们是被拆散的情侣 .....

为何你出生是太阳
而我是向日葵 ?

15 comments:

p3eng peNg wond3rl@nd said...

为什么你出生是海洋

而我却只是永远凝望着你的天空

有没有点相似的感觉。。?嘿嘿。。。只是供你参考。。 ^^

加油~

- JieYun - said...

[Pen Peng]
Ooo ?
Really quite similar oo ... haha !
Who written the phrase oo ?
zzzz.... seemed like my phrase is copy from there ... =.="
Sigh ... again my written is similar to other's ppl written ....aiseh ...

Cherry said...

哇...JY好有文采咯....嘻嘻...加加油哦...

连peng peng都有点文采了...哈哈...也加油啦..

我看我想到吗?...想...想...想...最后还是没想到...原来我真的没什么文采...paiseh..哈哈...

p3eng peNg wond3rl@nd said...

没有啦,其实是我看多了你的文章,然后再加上刚才自己的一点感触。。。就觉得如果是我,我会那样写而已。。。
其实到最后,是我抄你的吧。。酱你会高兴吧?哈哈。。。 因为是人家抄你,不是你抄人了。。。 ^^

- JieYun - said...

[Cherry]
哈哈。哎哟。
不要把我说得那么好。
我不过是普普通通的blogger而已~
^.^v

- JieYun - said...

[Peng Peng]
我还以为我写的,又和别人的有相似咯!
哈哈。
因为海洋和天空,我写过了。
这次就不写咯。再说,向日葵是我喜欢的花朵,就用它来提材咯~wakakaka ...:p

p3eng peNg wond3rl@nd said...

加油吧...^^

- JieYun - said...

[Peng Peng] Thanks thanks ...
i will try my best and keep it up ...
because i dream of it that i can publish a book which is belong to me one day ... wakaka ... but the dream is so far .....
Anyway , thank you ^.^v

p3eng peNg wond3rl@nd said...

ceh... 没听过美梦成真吗?有梦就会成真啊...好过那些没有梦想的...就像我...
有朝一日出书记得我们这班粉丝哦...免费签名哦...还要不用排队那种的...kekeke... lol... ^^

- JieYun - said...

[Peng Peng]
Hahaha ...
don't worry , if i really can publish a book one day , those request u said at above , all no problem ! hahaha ....
OoO ...i tot i have only 1 fan (Cherry) , u oso ?!
haha ... happy ^^v
my fans , from singular become plural d .... lol ~ hahaha !!

Cherry said...

hehe....remember oso lor..i'm the 1st fan le...peng peng, be 2nd la..haha...
JY, add oil add oil...

p3eng peNg wond3rl@nd said...

singular to plural... ==" good... now i realize long time didnt use these noun already...
emmm... cherry, 你始终是头号的。。。我哪里会跟你抢的叻。。。lol ^^

- JieYun - said...

[Cherry & Peng Peng]
Hahaha ....
if one day i really be an author , sure wont forget both of u 1 .. dun worry ... haha ....
then cherry can be the head of fans club d ...
wakakka ^.^v
(JY dreaming ....)

Cherry said...

haha...JY, sure u can de....
okok..me become president of JY fans club, then peng become vice president lor...hehe...

- JieYun - said...

[Cherry] Wait until the day & the dream comes true bah ...
hahaahha .....